Fantastic.
Great work here, glad to see you've brought back Jerry.
the animation was good but the script seamed kinda stale, not saying it was bad I just think there's room for improvement.
SpookyVille2's script seamed to me like it was thaught out more and being that this submission is for a contest I think you should have put a little more effort in to it.
Please don't take this the wrong way I'm only trying to help.
I wish more people who are critical of my work could be as polite about it as you are, friend. :)
As I type this, I can hear someone breaking into my house. This is unrelated, but I thought you'd find it interesting
Decent...
Don't take the 6 as an insult.
Over all the animation was bellow average but I'll give you credit being that your tablet is new and your not used to it. The syncing to the song however is what really made this cartoon as good as everyone says it is. But I've got standards to up hold so I have to give a 3.
Meaning "Not Bad. In fact... I like it!"
Just like the pico votes say on the side.
Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll put out great wonders with that tablet of yours!
thank you :)
Good but... Could be better.
You did a very good job on this but, I feel you could do much better. I feel that the Newgrounds users have become way to generous on there ratings. I remember a time when the top submissions score was at 4.20 and that was an unbelievable score.
On to the review. In my opinion the first two were thought out more. They properly brought the story out with the music, this one felt out of sync. Also your animation seems a little boring (not saying the whole thing was) just the actual animation itself. In the first two you had your viewers spinning and jumping right along with your characters but, in this one the cat seemed bored and kinda depressed. All I'm sayin is bring a little more excitement to the show. Don't get me wrong your animation is definitely better than what I can currently do but, I know you can do better. Try to apply that to step 4.
-Grizlybro-
Well done...
The work you put into this really shows. The hours you've spent on this are something I can only imagine. Although it is very good there are still some things you mite want to try and improve...
The story is fun and silly but at the same time its what we expect. Try and make your stories in to a game, by that I mean keep your audience guessing at whats going to happen next. If we see what we're used to seeing all the time, then it will become boring after a short period Don't take this the wrong way, it's only constructive criticism I mean no offense.
-Grizlybro
It's nice to see a Flash that's not half-assed.
There are few good flash movies on the internet. This one is great!!! The art work is nice and the story is very humorous. The mini game is fun but does get chalanging at higher levels, still I love the effort the auther put into this little movie. I hope to see many more movies with the creativity that this one has.
Age 33, Male
Joined on 8/4/06
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